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I dreamed you came to find me.
In a field, collapsed by a small patch of daisies.
I was staring willfully at the struggling buds, demanding them to grow.
Your shadow fell over my naked body, casting a protective darkness over my shoulders, which had been crisped by the sunlight.
As I struggled to my hands and knees in effort to stand,
I felt your arm about my waist and a strong hand clasping my wrist.

Without effort you pulled me to standing,
resting my body
atop my legs
atop my feet
atop the ground.

your great hand behind my head, supporting my gaze into your eyes.
a brief kiss to allot air into my lungs, and a tap on the ass to remind me I'm human,
and I like it.

You lead me to a light filled room...
nothing about me but my breathe and your body.
as I acclimate to my surroundings, I realize that you have brought me home.
Nothing more than a word until this very moment...
it becomes real, and I melt into it.
the light greets me, and ushers me into my being.
the corners of the room collide, and I am at long last comfortable.
the beginnings of a story..
based on a dream...
based on, reality.

ha

if ever I were to fall short in words, it would be in those descriptions of my dreams.

xox
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:iconiamthedark:
Iamthedark Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
Never knew you had so much more inner beauty waiting to be released...iamthedark
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FatalLover Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009
hehe nice ;] kinda cute
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lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
thanks!
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Lovespoon Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009  Professional Writer
Good, good.
Write some more...

+:fav:

:heart:

:teddy:
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009
:hug:
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:iconlovespoon:
Lovespoon Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2009  Professional Writer
aha symbolism for more writing. I'm waiting to read.

:smooch:

:teddy:
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satanspawn80 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Breathtaking. Words so evocative I can feel what you described as if I were there myself.
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner May 14, 2009
:hug:
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:iconbaronlee:
baronlee Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Professional Photographer
Beautiful!
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
thank you so much!
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:icondozalt:
dozalt Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008
...more please...
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
hopefully soon!
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:iconga-zoo:
ga-zoo Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
Wow, without words an breathless
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
thank you!
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:iconrobertogamez:
RobertoGamez Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
Great ...very ..sorry...I dont know the correct work in english... I will be close behind you to continue my reading.
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
thank you!
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:iconjosephmerrick:
josephmerrick Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
I like your writing.
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
thank you!
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:iconpesto-posta:
Pesto-Posta Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
Looking forwards to reading the end ;) :)
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
:)
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:iconpesto-posta:
Pesto-Posta Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
:D
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earthpig007 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
sultry ;)
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
thank you~
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:iconbakainu:
bakainu Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
beautiful writing, sounds like somebody is very lucky for the people they have in their life...
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
thank you!
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xXBloodRedCupcakeXx Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008   Writer
How pretty. I can imagine all of that. That was awesome. :)
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
thank you!
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xXBloodRedCupcakeXx Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008   Writer
Most welcome.
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Joe-Average Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
Wow! Demon... very very well written. There's just enough to give the reader some direction and feel your emotion, but enough left undescribed to allow the reader's mind to insert their own images and context... just like sharing a dream!

Excellent work here, my dear and I certainly hope you share some more!
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
thank you!
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:iconjoe-average:
Joe-Average Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
You are most welcome!
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Irthfather Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008   Writer
I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing...I really enjoyed imagining what you've written...it was wonderful to read...don't be discouraged if the words aren't always there...
Bravo~
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lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
thanks!
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Irthfather Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008   Writer
:)
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digitalHD Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008  Professional Photographer
This is beautiful my dear! I had no idea of this side of you. We are going to get along just fine! :hug:
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lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
:D
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:iconkellisanth:
Kellisanth Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
Oooooh, story time! :)

Very good imagery, this gives me. Moar?
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
perhaps...
;)
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:iconkinglemon:
Kinglemon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
Quite lovely :iconlilbittydemon: You know when we dream of flying we are remembering being carried by our parents?
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
I've never heard that before?
does that mean the dreams of falling are memories of when we were dropped???
lol
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Kinglemon Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
Maybee. Fortunately I don't have those often. But its usually off the white clifs of Dover for some reason. Once I landed and bounced.......lvq
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Joe-Average Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
I must personally disagree with the flying thing... I always fly just like Douglas Adams described in the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy... I simply jump at the ground and MISS!! Then I tend to just zip around houses...pretty lame.
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Kinglemon Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
Did your parents ever take you to legoland?
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:iconjoe-average:
Joe-Average Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
:laughing: nope, never been... but I had a TON of legos and played with them all the time!
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elvis15 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
I like the endings myself! Very nice, reminds me I should put some of mine up. I'm better at writing than pictures.
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lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
do eeeet.
:)
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:iconelvis15:
elvis15 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
Done and done. Three poems for everyone to read!
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deshi001 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
Damn. All I can say is damn. I don't know what to say to this except the feeling is very positive.

Always and Always.
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
thank you!
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harkalopchan Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2008  Professional Interface Designer
really beautiful dream
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