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I dreamed you came to find me.
In a field, collapsed by a small patch of daisies.
I was staring willfully at the struggling buds, demanding them to grow.
Your shadow fell over my naked body, casting a protective darkness over my shoulders, which had been crisped by the sunlight.
As I struggled to my hands and knees in effort to stand,
I felt your arm about my waist and a strong hand clasping my wrist.

Without effort you pulled me to standing,
resting my body
atop my legs
atop my feet
atop the ground.

your great hand behind my head, supporting my gaze into your eyes.
a brief kiss to allot air into my lungs, and a tap on the ass to remind me I'm human,
and I like it.

You lead me to a light filled room...
nothing about me but my breathe and your body.
as I acclimate to my surroundings, I realize that you have brought me home.
Nothing more than a word until this very moment...
it becomes real, and I melt into it.
the light greets me, and ushers me into my being.
the corners of the room collide, and I am at long last comfortable.
the beginnings of a story..
based on a dream...
based on, reality.

ha

if ever I were to fall short in words, it would be in those descriptions of my dreams.

xox
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:iconiamthedark:
Never knew you had so much more inner beauty waiting to be released...iamthedark
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:iconfatallover:
hehe nice ;] kinda cute
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Lovespoon Jan 3, 2009  Professional Writer
Good, good.
Write some more...

+:fav:

:heart:

:teddy:
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Lovespoon Jan 5, 2009  Professional Writer
aha symbolism for more writing. I'm waiting to read.

:smooch:

:teddy:
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satanspawn80 Dec 8, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Breathtaking. Words so evocative I can feel what you described as if I were there myself.
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baronlee Dec 5, 2008  Professional Photographer
Beautiful!
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:iconlilbittydemon:
thank you so much!
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