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raindrops on kittens and whiskers on roses
tattoos and piercings, like earings in noses
raven haired beauties all tied up in strings
these are a few of my favorite things

decadent colors and nights filled with laughter
childhood belief in the "forever after"
dreams where I soar through your sky on white wings
these are a few of my favorite things

boys with strong hands and the good sense to use 'em
biting my friends just to watch how I bruise them
a slap to my skin and the sweet glow it brings
these are a few of my favorite things
:blowkiss:
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:iconthegoldenf00l:
TheGoldenF00l Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
i must admit that is pretty bloody amusing! well done :-)
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011
*giggle*
thanks
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:iconthegoldenf00l:
TheGoldenF00l Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2011
thats ok, you made me chuckle, your a very talented lady :-)
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magamo Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
This poem has it all. It's delightfully hilarious, subtly erotic and soooooo cleverly crafted.

Plus, you can hum along while imagining a naked Julie Andrews being spanked!
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
:giggle:
TOTALLY!
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Riyllan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007   Writer
:-) :clap: this put a major smile on
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
:giggle:
one of my personal faves...
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aestheticirony Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautifully said :)
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2007
thanks!
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Gr9yFox Featured By Owner May 22, 2007
I hate "The Sound of Music" but this is just so awesome I couldn't go on without commenting it. :D
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Gr9yFox Featured By Owner May 23, 2007
You're kind :)
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner May 22, 2007
:D
thanks!
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:iconm0man:
M0man Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2007
If it didn't have the bit about boys at the end this would fit perfectly for me, It made me smile anyway.
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2007
lolol
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:iconlexxii:
lexxii Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
~sweet pose~
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Syrinx2112 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2007
I like the shot, but I like the manipulated poetry better ;)
Good stuff!
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2007
:D
lol
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:iconphoenix-cyrix:
Phoenix-Cyrix Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2007
Beautiful! Short but talks alot! Nice!
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2007
lol
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:iconphoenix-cyrix:
Phoenix-Cyrix Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2007
hehehehe. Nice to see u happy! =D. Do u like to do poetry? or is it just a once in a blue moon?
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2007
I love to write...
share very few of my works though
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:iconphoenix-cyrix:
Phoenix-Cyrix Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2007
Nice, oh yeah i realized that u share very few of ur work, hope to see more of it! =D
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Od-69one Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
THAT AWESOME!!! That was one of my favorite Chirstmas songs and now you made it better. kuddo
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2007
:D
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:iconlexxii:
lexxii Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
~if thats the truth~then slap my face and spank me~
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2007
:slap:
:spank:
lol
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:iconbound-candy:
bound-candy Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2007
hah, clever.
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2007
:D
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Arsnic-Ainjel Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant! Made my morning.
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2007
yay!!!
:hug:
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jordan-grey-21 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2007  Professional Writer
LOL! Beautiful photo and poem/song. :blowkiss:
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2007
ty so much!!!!
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angelfoxice Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
That is awsome. I like how you used the sound of music tune to create such a masterpiece of writing
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
:D
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:iconbulloney:
bulloney Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
you never cease to amaze, sweetie... there's so much more to you than just a purdy face, that's for sure!!

the second verse says a lot... may you never lose that sparkle... :beer:
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
may you always see it
:beer:
:hug:
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Pelicanh Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007  Professional Photographer
I'd like to hear you sing that in a karoake bar some time!
Or you can sing it here!
Cute.
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
lmao
I have obviously never sang for you!!!
:D
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:iconwom-bat:
Wom-bat Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007
I can just picture Julie Andwers singing this :giggle:

Did you come up with this? If yes then :clap:
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
:D
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Lucien23 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007
Oops, emoticon didn't work. This what I meant to put up.
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
:D
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:iconlucien23:
Lucien23 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007
Well, you're a naughty one aren't you? :promiscuous:
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
lol
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buggytj Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007
LOVE IT...................
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
yay!!!!
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DevinRichard Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007
Women and wine and lots of rap music
girls with azz that you cant easily bruise them
spreading her arms like a dark angel with wings
these are a few of my favorite things

Someone elses young children fast asleep and still dreaming
while moms legs are high to the sky and she's taking a beating
egg nog and the chorus just keeps on singing
these are a few of my favorite things

Handcuff and whips are always amusing
Santa will send me another girl for misusing
a woman who'll make the room seem like it's leaning
these are a few of my favorite, favorite things
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:iconlilbittydemon:
lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
:rofl:
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:icondevinrichard:
DevinRichard Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
I take it you liked my response toyour fab poem.
I just couldn't help it I luved the flow!
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:iconneoism:
Neoism Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007
This lovely rendition is one of my favorite things.
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