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raindrops on kittens and whiskers on roses
tattoos and piercings, like earings in noses
raven haired beauties all tied up in strings
these are a few of my favorite things

decadent colors and nights filled with laughter
childhood belief in the "forever after"
dreams where I soar through your sky on white wings
these are a few of my favorite things

boys with strong hands and the good sense to use 'em
biting my friends just to watch how I bruise them
a slap to my skin and the sweet glow it brings
these are a few of my favorite things
:blowkiss:
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TheGoldenF00l Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
i must admit that is pretty bloody amusing! well done :-)
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lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011
*giggle*
thanks
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TheGoldenF00l Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2011
thats ok, you made me chuckle, your a very talented lady :-)
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magamo Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
This poem has it all. It's delightfully hilarious, subtly erotic and soooooo cleverly crafted.

Plus, you can hum along while imagining a naked Julie Andrews being spanked!
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lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
:giggle:
TOTALLY!
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Riyllan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007   Writer
:-) :clap: this put a major smile on
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lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2007
:giggle:
one of my personal faves...
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aestheticirony Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautifully said :)
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lilbittydemon Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2007
thanks!
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Gr9yFox Featured By Owner May 22, 2007
I hate "The Sound of Music" but this is just so awesome I couldn't go on without commenting it. :D
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